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my script
Chaper 22.5
[Scene 1]
{Rufus enters hospital door, Rufus and Chuckare in hospital}
Rufus: Chuck how the helld you get in here
Chuck: Roofus i got somethings i need to get off my chest
Rufus: Chuck you lookin like you is a damn mess
Chuck: Roofus i love, you know you are my baby
Rufus: Look chuck, its just like i explained
Chuck: please dont speak another word
Chuck: i never meant to hurt
Rufus: chuck what you talkin bout
Rufus: did you run off to the papers runnin your mouth
Chuck: no but i got something important to say
Chuck: something i ran in your a
Rufus: oh shit, nigga - is it aids?!?
[CHUCK WEEPS, AND NODS HEAD YES]
Rufus: damn chuck who is it you screwin
Rufus: is it more than me, which youve been doin
Chuck: Rufus, you know my money aint straight
Chuck: and i just had to make my pay
Rufus: Chuck who have you been working for
Chuck: the thing is, pimp lucious made me a whore
Rufus: you mean lucious who be sitting in my pew
Posted:
Mar 23 2008, 5:00 AM EDT by
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my script part 2
{Chuck nods yes}
Rufus: I cant believe lucious pimped you too
Rufus: thought he only pimped with hos, like gwen, tina, and my wife too
{too echos four times while fading out climatically with each echo}
Chuck: What you mean he pimped your wife
Rufus: she was a rough spot in her life
Chuck: does that make it alright
Rufus: she never did bring me home aids
Rufus: I never really loved you anyway
{chuck sobs}
{chuck continues to weep}
{Chuck balls uncontrollably}
{Rufus conforts chuck}
{Rufus pulls chucks face to his boosom}
{Very young,very black, very fine, female nurse enters room}
Chuck: Damn girl, you could turn a nigga straight
Rufus: Stupid negro, she know you got aids
{Very young,very black, very fine, female nurse, quickly exits room}
{Chuck stands up from wheelchair and reveals a 9.}
<Chuck in threatening tone>
Chuck: these are the words im gonna say
Chuck: before a blow out all your brains
Roofus: Chuck it aint gotta end like this
Roofus: we can work through all this shit
Chuck: that 50$ wasnt worth this pain
Chuck: rev mosley paid me for a one night stay
Roofus: is that where you got yo aids
Chuck: yes, but its time to end this game
{game echos eight times while fading out more and more with each echo}
{Roofus frantically jumps at chuck to try to disarm him}
{BOOm!}
(Gunshot)
Scene fades out
let me know what you think of dis scrip, i was tryin to sleep but i couldn cuz i jus had all deez scenarioz runnin threw my mind so i hate to get some out. maybe i can sleep now, peace
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Mar 23 2008, 5:03 AM EDT by
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What Should Happen Next
i want tina to see pimp lucius i want twan to have the packege i want chuck to die and then rufus loves the cop ( james ) and then b...
Last updated:
May 13 2008, 7:32 AM EDT by
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wrench in the plan
Well I also thought Mr. Biggs would enter the fray next....but now that his parole has been denied Ron Isley has to served the rest of the 3 years on his sentence. Any Kellz wants to get this down before a possibility of anything happening to him.
I think the package think was all a makeup on Randolph, because he knows Rosie will spread it like wildfire.
Chapter 24
Chuck is in the hospital because he was in a beatdown....but he doesn't know who ambushed him. Meanwhile Sylvester goes to visit his momma Myrna, only to find out Pops is in jail, and Myrna gets into it with Twan, saying she knows his probation officer.
The actual spreading about the package is from the other policeman that answered the phone for James....look closed in the last chapter, his ring didn't go all the way away, he picked back up and listened in on the conversation. Also he sound a lot like Dominic, so I'm thinking they are either brothers or cousins. The contact of inside info Dominic has with the Chicago PD is going to alter the plans of the train from Indiana.
Just when Dominic think he is scott free and pulled one over on Sylvester, Odell is released by Sgt. James, once it is figured out the connection, to foil the plot. While in jail for few, Odell finds out a few things about his son's bro-in-law Twan.
The day after the Thursday nite train from Indiana (chapter 28), at the Par'jay club everybody is there fighting in VIP, Tina becomes a nervous wreck because she comes face to face once again with Pimp Luscious, and Bishop Craig, they ones who gave her the eye condition. While Sylvester was in prison, he learns that Gwen once was one of Pimp Luscious' hoes, that's how she knows Roxanne and Tina. When Dominic finds out Sylvester is at the Par'jay, his entourage rolls up in the to confront him about the what happened. Just when the Joey and Dominic pull guns on everybody, he comes Street and his Crew to handle things.
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Mar 12 2008, 3:08 PM EDT by
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